Task 1: Revist one of your early posts from last semester and give it the error correction treatment.

martes 6 de mayo de 2008

I think the video is kind of weird. Maybe we are so different to them that it is difficult to understand otherWW culture.

There are some sentences SM in my mind for ever, like ¨spare my life¨ and the dancing was really funny, so Nn I think the special association between the objects Sm produce the information stickWw in mind Pso Sm as a learning tool Sm it is good and funny.We I have something to say We what a horrible clothe P.

I cannot say more posotives things about the video because it was really strange, for example one of the thief was wearing something rare on his head.

It is hard to have a point or to add something about the video. Well my sister saw the video and she laughed a lot P andNn her opinion was this Sm is freak! and she was right but at least it has a point to teach english in a different way.

Publicado por Maria Jose en 19:46

Ww: wrong word
We: wrong expression
Wt: wrong tense
Sp:Spelling
C: Capital letters
P: punctuation
(wo): word order
Wf: wrong form
Nn: not needed?: not clear
Sm: something missing
Ew: Extra word