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A big film and one of my favourite is Big Fish a film directed by Tim Burton and written by John August. It is a beautiful history because your Ww plot is about the conflict between a father and his son because he counted Ww the moment of your life in a way very fantastic wo and this don’t like to his son.Along of the film Edward Bloom, the father, counted Ww many historiesWw about your Ww life and remember this, as when he were Wf a child and he were wf tree Ww years in his bead Ww due to his rapid growth for then become in a big athlete. Then he knows to a giant misunderstood and start a travel together and they visit a circus where they are working, is in this place where Edward knows love of his life and he must do Ww very much things for he can be with she. In the end of the film Edward is in the hospital with his son and he asks him that tell he a history Ww and he counted Ww he who they escaped of the hospital to the river, where it is all the people that he knows in his life, is in this place of his dream where he died.I love this film and it is to be seen for to know the nice it is and discover the wonderful messages that leaves, ideal to see in family.