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When I was in (Sm) second semester of Geography I(Ew) has(Ew) my prefer(Ww) subject, called(Ww) Geology, this subject was very entertaining and interesting for my(Ww), for the contents treaty(Ww) and for the feel(Ww) trip realised. In this subject we had three feel(Ww) trips, two feel(Ww) trips to the ¨Cajon del Maipo¨ and one to ¨Til-Til¨, the two feel(Ww) trips to the ¨Cajon del Maipo¨ were the best. In these(Sm) I learned very much things and to(Ew) recognize some(Ew) formations of the surface.The teacher made us collect rocks, to recognize their composition, to know as were formed and where they come from.I found much rocks very beautiful, of many colours and whit(Sp) beautiful crystals, that even I saved in a box like a treasure under my bed because a (Sm)love it.Also in this feel(Ww) trip we searched for fossil. I liked a lot this activity because I found a lot( Sm)fossil that I never thought that (Sm)finding and these(Sm) are also my little treasures whit(Sp) those(Ew) I can brag.I and all my classmates enjoy very much this feel(Ww) trip, that it was an experience (Wo)unforgettable and I liked both(Ww) that I repeat(Wt) whit(Sp) my parents whit(Sp) my boyfriend and they(Sm) able to learn some things that I teach(Wt) them.
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Some days ago, Gino, my best friend told me that he was playing a game on line about three civilizations; The Germans, the Gals and the Romans, the Game is called Travian. The play consist in(Wf) create a little town with one of the civilization appointed(Ww) before, then you must make grow these town until be(Ww) a big civilization. When you start the game one soldier of your town say how(Ww) you must do, first you must sow wheat and work in the mines and in the forest and you must produce mud, with this elements you can build barracks and others basics(Wf) building for your survive. When you have a town (Wo)strong with the basics elements, the soldier is leave(Wt) and the civilization is on your hands.This is a funny game (P) because you can attack others town and stole their products (Ew)for you, also you can training(Wf) many solders(Sp) different (Sm) and make business with others players (who too attack you) so is a good game, but nothing is perfect P this game is not the exception and sometimes it is a bit slow, but you can play while you (workWt) in the reports for the university. If do(Ew) you want play do (Sm) in travian.cl, (Sm)is easy and funny.