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When I was in (Sm) second semester of Geography I(Ew) has(Ew) my prefer(Ww) subject, called(Ww) Geology, this subject was very entertaining and interesting for my(Ww), for the contents treaty(Ww) and for the feel(Ww) trip realised. In this subject we had three feel(Ww) trips, two feel(Ww) trips to the ¨Cajon del Maipo¨ and one to ¨Til-Til¨, the two feel(Ww) trips to the ¨Cajon del Maipo¨ were the best. In these(Sm) I learned very much things and to(Ew) recognize some(Ew) formations of the surface.The teacher made us collect rocks, to recognize their composition, to know as were formed and where they come from.I found much rocks very beautiful, of many colours and whit(Sp) beautiful crystals, that even I saved in a box like a treasure under my bed because a (Sm)love it.Also in this feel(Ww) trip we searched for fossil. I liked a lot this activity because I found a lot( Sm)fossil that I never thought that (Sm)finding and these(Sm) are also my little treasures whit(Sp) those(Ew) I can brag.I and all my classmates enjoy very much this feel(Ww) trip, that it was an experience (Wo)unforgettable and I liked both(Ww) that I repeat(Wt) whit(Sp) my parents whit(Sp) my boyfriend and they(Sm) able to learn some things that I teach(Wt) them.
Publicado por Criss en 9:31 0 comentarios
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Some days ago, Gino, my best friend told me that he was playing a game on line about three civilizations; The Germans, the Gals and the Romans, the Game is called Travian. The play consist in(Wf) create a little town with one of the civilization appointed(Ww) before, then you must make grow these town until be(Ww) a big civilization. When you start the game one soldier of your town say how(Ww) you must do, first you must sow wheat and work in the mines and in the forest and you must produce mud, with this elements you can build barracks and others basics(Wf) building for your survive. When you have a town (Wo)strong with the basics elements, the soldier is leave(Wt) and the civilization is on your hands.This is a funny game (P) because you can attack others town and stole their products (Ew)for you, also you can training(Wf) many solders(Sp) different (Sm) and make business with others players (who too attack you) so is a good game, but nothing is perfect P this game is not the exception and sometimes it is a bit slow, but you can play while you (workWt) in the reports for the university. If do(Ew) you want play do (Sm) in travian.cl, (Sm)is easy and funny.

Task 1: Revist one of your early posts from last semester and give it the error correction treatment.

martes 6 de mayo de 2008

I think the video is kind of weird. Maybe we are so different to them that it is difficult to understand otherWW culture.

There are some sentences SM in my mind for ever, like ¨spare my life¨ and the dancing was really funny, so Nn I think the special association between the objects Sm produce the information stickWw in mind Pso Sm as a learning tool Sm it is good and funny.We I have something to say We what a horrible clothe P.

I cannot say more posotives things about the video because it was really strange, for example one of the thief was wearing something rare on his head.

It is hard to have a point or to add something about the video. Well my sister saw the video and she laughed a lot P andNn her opinion was this Sm is freak! and she was right but at least it has a point to teach english in a different way.

Publicado por Maria Jose en 19:46

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We: wrong expression
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P: punctuation
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Wf: wrong form
Nn: not needed?: not clear
Sm: something missing
Ew: Extra word

Task 2: 80 to 100 words on your opinion of the Error Correction activities so far:

I think blogs are a fun activity. Always, the connection between technology and learning process has positve effects on the students.

It is useful because develop the writing skill, also improve grammar of the languge. The main idea is the student notices his or her grammar mistake whlie practicing writing exercises. This point for me it is difficult I do not have a clear identification of the mistakes. I know that I am going to improve because checking others blogs help in the mistake’s recognition.

I believe it is going to be beneficial for the U.Chil students because of the motivation that it has blogs.

"Don´t let me down"

In the ¨Fiestas patrias¨ the Chileans celebrate the day of the independence, each Sm must put a flag in a Ew your Ww houses P for we Ww represent withWw our country and our celebration.In this celebration nobody work Wf, the 18Sm and Sm19Sm of woSeptember Wfis a free days and everybody celebrate, the Chileans get together with your family and they eat typical food and they play typical games as the ¨rayuela¨, fly a kite or a greased pole, also they can go to the ¨Fondas¨ where it have all this typical things and very much, food, games, enterteiment and typical souvenir for to buy. In this place is made different activities as typical dances and ¨rodeo¨, this time is very entertaining and ideal for spending time with the family.My family and I go to Panguipulli and in this place we create our own ¨Fonda¨, we decorate the place with flags and garlands.The first day my father and my uncle make a barbecue with a lot of meet, we eat meet all the day, it is very delicious, the second day we prepare an empanadas¨ and we do so much that we eat all the days and we left for the return trip.This time of the year is one of my favourite dates because the food is very delicious, we do many preparations and we enjoy much as family.


Ww: wrong word
We: wrong expression
Wt: wrong tense
Sp:Spelling
C: Capital letters
P: punctuation
(wo): word order
Wf: wrong form
Nn: not needed?: not clear
Sm: something missing
Ew: Extra word

A big film and one of my favourite is Big Fish a film directed by Tim Burton and written by John August. It is a beautiful history because your Ww plot is about the conflict between a father and his son because he counted Ww the moment of your life in a way very fantastic wo and this don’t like to his son.Along of the film Edward Bloom, the father, counted Ww many historiesWw about your Ww life and remember this, as when he were Wf a child and he were wf tree Ww years in his bead Ww due to his rapid growth for then become in a big athlete. Then he knows to a giant misunderstood and start a travel together and they visit a circus where they are working, is in this place where Edward knows love of his life and he must do Ww very much things for he can be with she. In the end of the film Edward is in the hospital with his son and he asks him that tell he a history Ww and he counted Ww he who they escaped of the hospital to the river, where it is all the people that he knows in his life, is in this place of his dream where he died.I love this film and it is to be seen for to know the nice it is and discover the wonderful messages that leaves, ideal to see in family.